October 11, 2005
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Exhuberant Evaluation
Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri
Turesday, October 11, 2005 5:51 am
Every moment spent in wonder
Life inhaled as a breath of purpose
Inner beauty shines bright, injected with
Zeal and quantum care
Always learning
Both earthbound and spiritual
Every moment spent alive and vibrant
Touching my
Humanity with softness and love
Memories might be hazy
Energy and stamina might lag a bit, but
Never does your caring or vibrancy lag
Doctors are a given in your existence
Ovarian obstacles and diabetic detritus
Zoo animals inhabit your room
And you always have a smile for the world
The Best Date
Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri
Tuesday, October 11, 2005 6:15 am
I want to sire you up to Heaven
Riding in a carriage pulled by swans
Listening to the music of the stars
Swooning in their bowers in the skies.
I want to kiss you in a moonbeam
Shining along with old man moon’s smile
Hearing the Heavenly choirs of angels
Singing just for us
I want to couple with you forever
And never leave your side
I want to feel your body breathe
My breath inside your lungs
I long to live beside you daily
So we can feel each other’s heartbeat
Every day is now an excuse to think of you
Every moment is a moment spent beside you
In memory.
Every life is one that touches yours
And every love is one that reaches you
Our best date has not yet begun
Our life is but a beginning right now,
Taking babysteps to Heaven.
But the swans are at the ready
And the carriage is waiting,
With a shine that blinds the sun.
The Best Date is forever
And I will spend it with you, my only one.
BEHIND THE POETRY: The first poem is an anacrostic, and the first letters of all the lines spell Elizabeth’s name. I have always written anacrostic poetry for every gal with whom I have ever been involved. It is one of my “traditions”. I have already written a few poems for Liz, but “Exhuberant Evaluations” is the anacrostic that has been bubbling in my brain for a few weeks. All my poetry for Liz will be presented on this site instead of on WhenWordsCollide, so subscribe to this site too if you subscribe to my regular site, in order to receive all my poetry as I write it. MFN 10/11/05
Comments (4)
Damn you two are adorable together! Like schoolchildren! LOL Goodness, I just read back and I must say, my third (3 years) anniversary with hubby just passed, and it was not nearly as exciting as your monthiversary. :O)
I’m so happy for you both! Everyone deserves some joy in their lives, especially with the world as it is today… and you two are doing a great job of instilling joy in each others lives. Hurray for new love!
Those pictures from your date are fantastic… I do wish I had an eye for photography… perhaps if I had a decent camera I might try my hand at it… oh dear. I have no idea how this just turned into italics!! Interesting… hmmmm. I have no idea how to turn it back.
Anywhoo… I don’t have room for both of you on my protected list (a whole 10 people for poor little xanga classic users LOL)… Mike is on it already. Perhaps if you subscribe with this site which you both have access to I could replace Mike on the list with this site so both of you may read? Let me know my dears!
Sincerely,
Dezz
Both you guys are lucky. I love your poetry, you are a romantic so it seems. Lucky lady, lucky gentleman.
Peace and Love:)
Dear Mike,
Sorry to have not responded right away, but I have been reading these words … and am amazed at how much detail you fit into the first one. You make diseases sound good … lol.
What else can I say but thank you …
Love,
Liz